Seven eleven

Jane Nash: Micro-Story ‘Seven eleven’

Jane Nash
Jane Nash
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“That cat!” Shouted the bald assistant behind the counter. He came out from behind it, flapping a rolled up newspaper towards the cat. It was as comical as ineffective. The cat strode further into the shop following a pair of red high-heeled shoes. A new purchase – widows should always wear red once mourning is spent, 

Purring  and chirping, the stray Maine Coon, who was almost the size of a medium dog, made its way to a large glass counter warmer which displayed cooked meat pies for sale..

The red shoes clicked over to the assistant “Like my late husband, Monty” she said, “always loved his pies.” The tom cat turned his head and when their eyes met, it winked at her. Not a random wink but a slow, serious one. Just like Monty used to when he was being rebellious or naughty.

“Has he got a name?” She couldn’t resist stroking this magnificent cat who returned the affection by weaving through her sheer-stockinged legs, brushing against her before returning to stare at the pies.

Losing a husband may seem careless but the lack of Monty now afforded her new, fashionable clothes, holidays with friends and an unrestricted diet. She was thinking about a pet, never having been allowed one.

“I don’t care what it’s called! I want it out of here!” 

“I’d like to buy a pie. A cold one from the back please. Yesterday’s.”

On the pavement a huge Maine Coon tom cat held her gravied, manicured fingers between his paws and licked the soft skin clean with his rough tongue.

Does she believe in reincarnation? She doesn’t know nor does she care. She picks up a very large cat who is cleaning his whiskers and makes her way to a pet store.

A collar, harness, lead and a name-tag later, she has her pet and the name…? Guess!

Jane Nash

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The misery of a finger

Surendra Nagaraju: Drabble ‘The misery of a finger’

Surendra Nagaraju - Elanaaga
Surendra Nagaraju – Elanaaga
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An index finger was admitted to a hospital with twitchings. Investigations could not clinch the

diagnosis. The perplexed doctors pinned hopes on digging deep into the medical history.

Meanwhile, the finger became delirious. The interrogation was intensified. Then came the clue. “Withdrawal Syndrome,” they shouted jubilantly. But withdrawal from what? It could not be ascertained.

Correlating the patient’s past habits with the symptoms gave a clue. The doctors advised the finger to resume its habit of scrolling the posts on Facebook etc.

The patient followed the instructions again diligently.

Hurrah, the finger got well and was discharged from the hospital!

Surendra Nagaraju

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She takes a sip

Jane Nash: Microfiction ‘She takes a sip’

Jane Nash
Jane Nash
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Just a sip. It is enough to register in her hair if needs be but not enough to kill her. She’s practiced the smile she now uses, urging her husband to finish his Coke. Old style bottles in a crate. She has rehearsed removing the lid. She has also learned how to replace the cap quite closely, leaving no room for mistakes.

He is thirsty, She brings him another Coke, opening the bottle in front of him at the dinner table. She takes a sip before she gives him the bottle.

He feels bilious. He aches in his guts. Nausea permeates his sinuses. This subsides overnight leaving in its wake, increasing lethargy and confusion.

Each night at dinner, she opens a bottle, takes a sip and leaves the rest for him to finish.

Any ill effects she feels, she knows will pass. It is worth it. She gives up drinking Coke with him. She prefers water, she says as he glugs down the tainted soda. She comforts herself. It shouldn’t take that long. She has the patience of Job.

Arsenic, so light to ingest, too heavy to move.

Jane Nash

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